Форум Wizards World

[Лау_Арафэль]

Dance with me child under rain and snow
Play your innocent and harmless show
Look at me child; try to see in my eyes
Time of never-ending, unlimited skies

Dance like you never danced before, girl
Under gleaming and warm waterfall
Watch and observe, try to understand
That nothing and everything have its end

Dance with me woman of eternal dream
Let to your self to be carry by stream
Learn and you will find out The Law
Some one behind us running this show

[Лау_Арафэль]

It’s gleaming, it’s glimmer it’s all that you need.
Stone of fate, which you didn’t read,
I made it for you before aeons of time.
Sound of avalanche it’s a natural rhyme.

It’s dusty, it’s rusty it’s all that you need.
Word of illusion, which you never heed,
I said it for you millions realm ago.
And now it’s time, you have to grow.

[Лау_Арафэль]

On a mirror wall draws an illusive trace…
In reflection I see golden image of face
Can you tell me who are you? What secrets you keep?
But like stone in sea I’m drowning deep…

In your eyes, in your eyes…
I see, I see…
Way to lost paradise
Endless hope and my lee

It’s a magic of feelings, how could you forget
Our past was so perfect, but you still regret
All answers we needed you have seen in sleep
And maybe it causes me to drown so deep…

In your eyes, in your eyes…
I see, I see…
Way to lost paradise
Endless hope and my lee

Time always was nothing, but wounds never heal
Constrain your wishes, my promise like still
My golden illusion – you make me weep
But each time I see you, I’m drowning deep…

In your eyes, in your eyes…
I see, I see…
Way to lost paradise
Endless hope and my lee

[Элберет77]

Why are you having some grammar mistakes?I live in the country? where the first offisial language is English.But that was nice!Way to go!

[Лау_Арафэль]

[Lapochka341]

I live in australia...and guess what i think...i think grammar mistakes make the poems only better!!!!...

[Supporter]

May I leave my own poem here?..
Or that topic is only for you?


your poems is good, i think ))

[Starperij]

Эээ... вы это чего, ребята?

[Supporter]

хи хи хи))
let's speak english// or let's learn english!
хи хи хи)

[Starperij]

[Лау_Арафэль]

[Лау_Арафэль]

I have never been there, where I have never been
I did so many bad things, but I didn’t sin
I lost my excitement, I’ll forget, what forgot
In middle inside me, I found eternity slot.

I will never be there, where I never will be
I have many excuses, but they can not save me
I desire do nothing or destroy to create
In my heart and my soul enough place for hate

I have never lost there, where I have never lost
You can call it: “Murder”, but I call it “Just”
You could scream: “You Assassin”, but would it be truth?
Everything that I have done… Everything was for you!

I will never find there, where I never will find
You can call it: “Places”, but I call it: “Mind”
You can cry out loud, but your tears, sure, will lie
Everything that I have done… You forgot and will die.

[Лау_Арафэль]

[Лау_Арафэль]

The fray is over, but not the war.
My love can’t live here anymore.
Am I forgotten? And who am I?
Your world is rotten, I wish to die.

I wish to die, not for someone
But for myself it could be done
Am I just weak or maybe strong?
Your world is dead. I can’t be wrong.

I can’t be wrong, cause I can see
There is no time to let you free
And now you begin to hover
War never ends, the fray is over.

The fray is over, but not the life
Without water I can not dive
Am I not satisfied enough?
Your world is ill. You killed our grove.

You killed our grove. All leaves are black.
I can not stay, I can’t come back.
Am I not punished by foe?
Your world is gray. And you just toy.

And you just toy of power spell.
I can not cry but I will yell:
I’m not your foe, I’m not your lover.
Life never ends, the fray is over.

[Soidoc]

Аффтар, между уровнем стихотворений и уровнем вашей прозаической писанины зависла такая грамматическая пропасть, что мне даже неинтересно искать, у кого вы творчество спёрли )

[Нейлема]

Well done!!!
But there are some grammer mistakes.
All in all your poems are quite good!)))

[Supporter]

Цитата:

Хоть засмеялся по нашему

а вот оскоблять не надо)))... в мужской пол не ставить мну)

[Melaniy]

Я не пойму - зачем писать свои вирши на инглише? или на каком другом.. Смысл? Чё. русский не ндравится? По-моему очень гибкий. замечательный язык.

[Нейлема]

[Melaniy]

Нейлема
Во-первых, я не сочинение пишу на экзамене, чтобы не сметь себе позволить пару продуманных отступлений от правил орфографии, во-вторых, имел место быть вопрос, заданный автору топика, если Вы не въехали, милейшая, и в третьих, будьте так любезны, не указывайте мне, что делать. Грамотная какая козюля, тоже мне, ха!

[Starperij]